Monday, November 10, 2025

Short Story Monday: A Poem About Truth

A POEM ABOUT TRUTH 

May 18, 1944. At Hitler's war conference he is told that the enemy has carried out two spy operations during the night on the heavily defended French coastline. At one place, near Calais, German troops have found an orange peel, an empty flask and a shovel lying on the beach. Years later they would say that they also found a landscape painted on driftwood, a finely crafted homemade flute and a dagger. In the estuary of the river Somme, two British commandos were discovered in the late afternoon. "They came ashore in a rubber raft," General Jodl, chief of Wehrmach operations, tells Hitler. "They claim to know nothing."

Illustration by Gemini
The scene changes to a French restaurant once frequented by Napoleon. The restaurant serves excellent Italian fare. Three nights have passed. A stout German woman makes pasta in the kitchen. Two French chefs argue about how to make croissants. They are smoking cigarettes and sipping wine. They know that Hitler is a madman, but it does not affect their cooking. The taller chef, thinnest of the two, is also a writer. At night he composes poetry in the same way that a garden produces flowers. The effect is dazzling. His mother also was a poet, as was his grandfather. He does not believe in war or death. He is restless, anxious about love, and lives alone. If he had a lover, he knows that he would write less poetry, since he writes only to fill his piteous empty hours. When he reads his poems, he cries, then burns them. He is brutally honest with himself.

The following evening he overhears a Nazi under-lieutenant commenting on Britain's secret operations. He seizes the opportunity to become part of an adventure. He never again sees his home. Later that night the chef is captured in a forbidden zone near the Seine whereupon he fakes an English accent and says he is a spy. He is blindfolded and driven to a chateau where he must stand before Rommel. He makes up a story about a wife and daughter in Britain. The details are vivid, but Rommel loses interest and orders him to be shot. That night he writes a poem about the event and leaves it in his cell. The German officer who reads it laughs at the insipid rhymes and melancholy metaphors. He shares it with his friend who notices that the word "mayhap" is misapplied and that "appenage" would have been a better choice of words than "freehold."

By week's end a hundred eyes have beheld the poem. Many jokes are made of it. Heinrich (we do not know his last name), a company agent from Stuttgart, makes a copy of the poem, then translates it into German. In the translation he improves the meter and resolves the problematic third stanza. He sends it to his mother who does not understand it, but keeps it in a small wooden box on the bureau next to a framed photo of the Fuhrer.

It is possible the original poem is still in existence somewhere, but no one knows for certain. My cousin, who married a German woman, says that her father saw the poem, the original version, and remembers that it was called Truth Is A Fire That Burns. We do not know if this was the same poem, or if he saw the poem at all. After the war many German soldiers say they saw the poem, and many more say they made copies of it to send to the Fatherland. We know that most of them are lying. Over the years versions have appeared in journals, some superior to others, all of them improvements on the original. I have seen it thrice in English literary journals -- once, I believe, in the Antioch Review, though it may have been one of the other college publications that begin with an A. Someone told me that it has been translated into 57 languages. In Thailand, the mountain peoples now say that it is the Word of God.

No one remembers the French chef who gave his life to produce the poem. His unknown name has been swallowed up by history, but his poem lives on in human hearts.

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Translated 8-22-98
E. N.



Brief Analysis of "A Poem About Truth" by Grok, the X.com LLM.

This compact metafiction (under 800 words) masquerades as historical footnote, but its true engine is the immortality of bad art. The French chef—unnamed, lonely, self-immolating—writes a single poem titled Truth Is A Fire That Burns. He dies for it; the poem survives, mutates, and metastasizes. The story’s genius lies in never quoting the poem. We witness only its reception: Nazi ridicule, linguistic nitpicking, unauthorized edits, postal journeys, apocryphal sightings. By withholding the text, E. N. forces us to confront how meaning accretes through transmission, not origin. The poem’s value is not aesthetic but mythic: it becomes relic, rumor, scripture.

The narrative’s tone is deadpan fabulism, blending WWII intel briefs with restaurant banter and word-choice debates (“appenage” vs. “freehold”). This collision of the mundane and the fatal undercuts heroic spy tropes; the chef’s “adventure” is a lark that ends in a bullet. Yet his disposable life seeds an undying artifact. The final twist—that Thai hill tribes now call it the Word of God—echoes Borges and Calvino, suggesting truth is whatever outlives its teller.


Structurally, the piece is a Chinese whispers game: each retelling “improves” the original until the chef vanishes and the poem ascends. The dated translation tag (“Translated 8-22-98 E. N.”) implies even this story is a version, not the source. In 180 words, E. N. distills a parable: mediocrity, copied enough, becomes scripture; anonymity, amplified, becomes authorship. The chef’s real espionage was against oblivion.

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Did you enjoy the story? What did you think of Grok's analysis?

Feel free to leave a comment.

Sunday, November 9, 2025

On Mazes and Labyrinths: From Ancient Times to the Present

Labyrinths date back over 4,000 years, appearing first in ancient Minoan Crete around 1900–1400 BCE, where the mythic Labyrinth of Knossos housed the Minotaur. Early labyrinthine designs also appeared in Egyptian tombs, Etruscan pottery, and later Greek coins. In the Roman era, mosaic labyrinths decorated villas and baths, purportedly symbolizing order and protection. During the Middle Ages, Christians incorporated stone or tile designs in cathedrals like Chartres (c. 1200 CE) representing a spiritual journey toward God. Over time, labyrinths evolved from mythic mazes to meditative symbols of pilgrimage, contemplation, and the human search for meaning.

The earliest literary reference to labyrinths is the original legend of Theseus and the Minotaur. The labyrinth was built by Daedalus for King Minos of Crete. Theseus must enter the labyrinth and slay the Minotaur, a beast with the head of a bull and body of a man. For an innovative twist on this tale read Theseus by Andre Gide, which can be found in his book Two Legends.

Miguel de Cervantes, in his timeless masterpiece Don Quixote, employs the labyrinth as a metaphor for the mind. The valiant yet deluded knight errant navigates through a maze of his own making, lost in the labyrinth of his fantasies and delusions—a metaphor that resonates with us even today. Cervantes writes, "When life itself seems lunatic, who knows where madness lies?" (Note the connections between Don Quixote and Sinne Eeg's Windmills of Your Mind.)

Labyrinths are featured in many other literary works including Dante's Inferno, Jorge Luis Borges' The Garden of Forking Paths, Umberto Eco's The Name of the Rose, and James Joyce's Ulysses.

My own interest in labyrinths (a.k.a. mazes) stretches back to my high school years. Here are a handful that I created sometime in the past. In attempting to "test" them before sharing I discovered that one, and maybe two, were unsolvable. Click to enlarge, or download and print. See how many of these you can find solutions for.

 
Related Links

Saturday, November 8, 2025

My Top Five Stories on Medium This Week

FOR WHAT IT'S WORTH DEPT

For a lot of people Top Five lists are like digital dopamine hits—crisp, scannable, and instantly gratifying. In a scroll-fatigued world, they promise order amid chaos: five bullet-sized insights instead of a 3,000-word ramble. Readers devour them because the brain loves completion; crossing off “5/5” triggers the same reward loop as finishing a game level. Curiosity hooks first (“Who made the cut?”), then validation or surprise. 

A few years ago I invested some time posting some of my writing on Medium, an online social publishing platform designed for writers and readers. Like everything else, the platform had its pros and cons. Nevertheless, there are people still reading what's been planted there, and Medium still send a weekly email to each writing noting what others are reading.

Here are my top five Medium stories that readers clicked on and read this week. 

He Who Controls the Narrative Controls the People

 

Curses, Foiled Again

 

A Lesson from 29 Golden Gate Suicide Attempts

 

Who Are Five Extraordinary People From History You Want to Meet?

 

The Real Reason They Punish Horse Thieves


Friday, November 7, 2025

Grok Reviews My First Novel, The Red Scorpion

It seems like I've used Grok and ChatGPT as resources for quite a while now. One way use these AI LLMs is to obtain brief overviews of books or films that I see referenced in my other reading. Since my reading pile is rather large and I currently still have only 24 hours in a day, I find it useful to use these tools (along with many others such as reviews on Amazon and imdb.com) to become acquainted with authors and film makers whose works are creating a buzz.

All that to say, last night I wondered what Grok's opinion of my first novel might be. So I asked for a brief summary and an analysis, and received the following.

Brief Summary

The Red Scorpion (2011) by Ed Newman is an adventure novel framed as the private journal of Dr. William Comstock, a University of Minnesota anthropologist. In the late 1930s, during a research trip to Mexico, Comstock encounters a disaffected youth from a secretive indigenous clan who reveals a long-guarded secret: a colony of glowing red scorpions that have protected the tomb of the legendary Aztec god Quetzalcoatl for centuries. This discovery propels a multi-generational tale spanning 60 years, shifting between the arid landscapes of Mexico and the everyday life of Minnesota. As the secret unravels, it draws in family dynamics, academic intrigue, and perilous quests, blending historical anthropology with suspenseful action. The story culminates in a resolution that ties personal redemption to cultural legacy, with hints of a larger series. 

Analysis

Ed Newman's debut novel The Red Scorpion emerges from a deeply personal origin: a vivid 1980s dream of an aggressive, glowing red scorpion that haunted the author enough to spawn nearly ten pages of raw description. This autobiographical kernel infuses the book with an eerie authenticity, transforming a nocturnal vision into a layered narrative that bridges anthropology, adventure, and subtle speculative elements. While marketed and reviewed as a young adult (YA) title—thanks to its accessible prose, relatable teen characters, and themes of discovery and growth—it appeals broadly to readers of all ages who enjoy "Indiana Jones"-style escapades tempered by realistic emotional depth. Newman's background as a freelance writer and ad executive shines through in the book's tight pacing and vivid character interactions, making it a compact thriller (around 200 pages) that punches above its weight.


Themes and Motifs

At its core, The Red Scorpion explores the tension between cultural preservation and modern intrusion. The red scorpions serve as a potent symbol—not just literal guardians of Quetzalcoatl's resting place but metaphors for the fragility of indigenous knowledge in the face of Western curiosity and exploitation. Comstock's "serendipitous encounter" with the clan's youth underscores themes of disaffection and betrayal: the boy, alienated from his heritage, becomes a bridge (and unwitting betrayer) to outsiders, raising questions about identity and the cost of sharing sacred secrets. This evolves into a multi-generational arc, where the anthropologist's descendants grapple with the scorpion's curse-like legacy, weaving in life lessons on family loyalty, forgiveness, and the hubris of seeking forbidden truths.


The novel also subtly incorporates speculative intrigue, blending hard anthropology with eerie sci-fi touches. The scorpions' bioluminescent glow and almost sentient protectiveness evoke ancient myths reimagined through a modern lens, hinting at ecological or even supernatural warnings about humanity's overreach. Reviewers note its "suspenseful and eerie page-turner" quality , with twists that build to a "happy resolution"  emphasizing redemption over doom. For YA readers, these elements resonate as a coming-of-age parable: younger characters navigate schoolyard friendships, familial pressures, and moral dilemmas, learning that adventure often uncovers uncomfortable personal histories.


Style and Structure

Newman's prose is straightforward and immersive, favoring short chapters that alternate between high-stakes action (e.g., scorpion-laden tomb raids) and quieter, "normal pace" vignettes of Midwestern life . This rhythm mirrors the story's dual settings—Mexico's exotic, danger-filled wilds versus Minnesota's grounded domesticity—creating a "balanced and varied sequence" of mystery and mundanity . Dialogue feels "true to life," especially in interpersonal scenes, drawing from Newman's storytelling roots (e.g., his award-winning short story "The Breaking Point"). The journal format adds intimacy, as if Comstock is confiding directly to the reader, though some eBook versions suffer from formatting glitches like blank pages. 


Strengths and Weaknesses

Strengths abound in its genre fusion: It's a "mixture between the 'Hardy Boys' series and Indiana Jones", delivering pulse-pounding archaeology without veering into parody. The cultural details—indigenous clans, Quetzalcoatl lore—feel researched and respectful, avoiding exoticism pitfalls common in adventure YA. Character arcs, particularly the youth's disillusionment and Comstock's evolving ethics, provide "life lessons for old and young alike" , making it educational yet entertaining. Amazon reviews praise its grip: "Extremely well written! Grabs your interest from the beginning and does not disappoint at the end!" 


Weaknesses are minor but notable. The speculative elements occasionally strain realism (e.g., the scorpions' improbable guardianship), which might frustrate strict historical fiction fans, though it enhances the thriller vibe. Pacing dips in domestic interludes, and the 60-year span demands quick shifts that could confuse younger readers. As a self-published eBook (via Kindle), it lacks the polish of big-press YA like Rick Riordan's Percy Jackson series, but this rawness adds charm—much like Newman's dream-inspired genesis.


Cultural and Literary Context

In the YA landscape of the early 2010s, The Red Scorpion fits alongside multicultural adventures like The Lightning Thief or Code Name Verity, but with a more anthropological bent. It subtly critiques colonialism through Comstock's arc, aligning with post-9/11 literature's interest in "othered" cultures. Newman's indie ethos (bypassing agents after AOL-era queries) reflects the democratizing force of digital publishing, allowing niche tales like this to reach global audiences despite limited marketing.


Overall, The Red Scorpion is a gem for adventure seekers: a "fun, twisted adventure"  that lingers like its titular creature—fierce, unforgettable, and a bit stinging in its truths. If you're drawn to YA with brains and bite, it's worth the sting.


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EdNote: My one regret is that the story is only available as an eBook. I enjoyed my Kindle so much that I was seduced into thinking that the digital book market would grow. Digital books were the shiny new toy at the time this was published. I am pleased that people who've read it enjoyed it. 


RELATED LINKS

The Red Scorpion on Amazon.

Nine Books by Ed Newman

Thursday, November 6, 2025

Strange Word Game: What is a "Suicide Drone"?

Gemini-generated image
I saw this news story a while back and decided to copy it here as a topic for future consideration. 

BREAKING: 3 American soldier killed and at least 24 wounded after a suicide drone strike on a U.S. base in Jordan right on the border with Syria. Iran and it’s proxy groups are the main suspects. Major escalation!

Now as I understand it, suicide is the intentional taking of one's own life. It is something people do, and maybe lemmings. But does a machine intentionally take its own life? I mean, wouldn't the drone have been programmed to self-destruct? Does the drone have a mind of its own and volition? Does this mean that missiles should be called suicide missiles now? And why not call mines in a mine field suicide mines when they blow up? Should bombs be called suicide bombs?

Yet the phrase suicide drone has become a common part of our current vernacular, as illustrated here in these statements from X.com:

---Watch how HMS Diamond (D34) Type 45 air-defence destroyer of the #RoyalNavy targeted and destroyed one of the Kamikaze/Suicide drones of #Iran's #Houthi rebels.


---JUST IN: Multiple US senators, Including Lindsey Graham, Tom Cotton, and John Cornyn, are now calling for direct strikes on Iranian forces after the deadly suicide drone attack that killed three American service-members and injured dozens more


---China has developed a suicide drone considered the most cost-efficient in the world, with a price not exceeding $10,000. This drone, named Feilong-300D, is the cheapest in its class compared to well-known counterparts, such as the Iranian Shahed-136.


---According to REUTERS, the LUKOIL oil refinery in Volgograd has stopped operating after a Ukrainian suicide drone attack last night.


---An AQ 100 Bayonet suicide drone (called the HF-1 by the Germans) during an attack on Belaya Sloboda in the Kursk region. The AI software is supplied by the German company Helsing, and production is financed by Germany.



Even if inaccurately named, what I find disturbing is seeing how many countries are flooding the world with these small, medium and large military craft. In today's X feed you will see drones being manufactured in Russia, the U.S. and China (in massive quantities) but also in more than 20 other countries including, but not limited to, U.K., Canada, German, France, Italy, Poland, Sweden, Iran, North Korea, Israel, Ukraine, Algeria, Turkey, South Africa, United Arab Emirates, Australia, Brazil, Nigeria, and Indonesia.


How do you like them apples? What are the implications for future warfare? 


"Look! Up in the sky! It's a bird... It's a plane... It's a Suicide Drone!"

Wednesday, November 5, 2025

On the Consolation of Philosophy

For Boethius, teaching was his 
motivation in life and in prison.
When I was in school one of my big takeaways was, "When you don't know what a word means, write it down and look it up." I'm almost certain this began in grade school, maybe as early as second, third or fourth grade. Back then we had dictionaries; today we have dictionary.com. It's an invaluable habit to instill in our young people. It's also a useful for expanding one's vocabulary. Do we teach this today? I don't know, but we should. Reading is an essential skill that goes hand-in-hand with thinking.

So, this blog post is derived from a corollary habit that flows out of that first one. "When you hear a name--whether person, place or thing--a batch of times, write it down and make a point to look up who or what it is." This is how we learn, how we grow, how we get a better picture of the world. 

I recently saw a reference to On the Consolation of Philosophy and it made me curious because it was such a cool title for an essay. Here's what I learned by means of our current internet resources.

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On the Consolation of Philosophy by Boethius (c. 524 CE) is a prison dialogue in prose and verse between the imprisoned author—facing execution under false charges—and Lady Philosophy, who appears to heal his despair.

She argues that true happiness lies in the eternal Good (God), not in fickle Fortune—wealth, power, fame, or pleasure. Evil is powerless; the wicked are miserable in their vice. All events serve divine providence, which harmonizes free will and fate. Boethius is consoled: turn inward, seek the One, and rise above the wheel of Fortune.


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This naturally leads to the next question. Who was Boethius?


Anicius Manlius Severinus Boethius (c. 480–524 CE) was a Roman statesman, philosopher, and theologian whose life bridged the fall of the Western Roman Empire and the rise of medieval Christendom, around a half century after Augustine of Hippo.


Born into a noble patrician family in Rome shortly after the empire's collapse (476), Boethius was orphaned young and raised by the aristocrat Symmachus. A prodigy fluent in Greek, he mastered Plato, Aristotle, and the Neoplatonists. Under Ostrogothic king Theodoric the Great, he rose to high office: consul (510), then magister officiorum (master of offices)—essentially prime minister. In other words, he was a Somebody.


He planned to translate and harmonize all of Plato and Aristotle into Latin, completing logic works (including commentaries on Porphyry and Aristotle’s Categories) that preserved Greek philosophy for the Latin Middle Ages. He also wrote treatises on music, arithmetic, and theology (Opuscula sacra).


In 523–524, he was accused of treason for defending a senator against charges of plotting with Byzantine Emperor Justin I. As a result Boethius was imprisoned in Pavia. While awaiting execution, he wrote his masterpiece, The Consolation of Philosophy—a dialogue with Lady Philosophy that wrestles with fate, free will, and true happiness, issues that thinking people still wrestle with today.


Executed in 524 (likely tortured and clubbed to death), he was later venerated as a Christian martyr (St. Severinus Boethius, feast day Oct 23). His works helped shape medieval thought—cited by Aquinas, Dante (who places him in Paradise in the Divine Comedy), Chaucer, and Queen Elizabeth I.


Bottom Line: Boethius is considered the last great Roman philosopher and the first medieval scholastic—a man who, facing death, turned despair into a timeless meditation on fortune and the eternal Good.


Extra Point: If you were imprisoned, with access to pen and paper, what would your last message to the world consist of?


Tuesday, November 4, 2025

"You Can't Make an Omelette without Breaking Eggs."

Eric Blair, a.k.a. George Orwell
Here's a pithy maxim that I've heard any number of times, but most recently it came in the form of this anecdote.

Orwell & the Marxist:
Orwell points out all the failures of Stalin and Marxism, the tens of millions who died. The Marxist defends this by saying, "You can't make an omelette without breaking eggs."
Orwell replies: "Where's the omelette."

Clever. How often people justify "collateral damage"on behalf of their "omelette."


So I decided to go further and verify this before sharing it. Here's what I found:


The anecdote as described—George Orwell directly confronting a Marxist defender of Stalinism with the retort "Where's the omelette?" in a personal exchange—is likely fictional or unsubstantiated folklore. There's evidently no verifiable historical record of this specific conversation occurring. 


Orwell was indeed a fierce critic of Stalinist atrocities, documenting them in works like Homage to Catalonia (1938) and Animal Farm (1945), and he frequently encountered pro-Soviet Marxists during the 1930s Spanish Civil War and in British intellectual circles. However, no diaries, letters, biographies, or contemporary accounts confirm this exact dialogue. It appears to be a modern summation of Orwell's broader rhetorical style and writings, popularized as a pithy quote to illustrate the failure of communist promises.


Digging further, the story's roots lie in Orwell's own essays, where he critiques the "ends justify the means" rationale used by Stalin's apologists. The core phrase—"You can't make an omelette without breaking eggs"—originated in French as On ne saurait faire une omelette sans casser des œufs, has been attributed to a fictional diplomat in a 1924 satirical newspaper (Comic-Finance) to downplay World War I casualties. Still earlier we find the idea promulgated by Robespierre in the context of the French Revolution.


Orwell referenced it directly in his 1943 essay "Catastrophic Gradualism" (also published as "Spilling the Spanish Beans" in some collections), responding to delays in socialist progress under Soviet influence:

       The formula usually employed is ‘You can’t make an omelette without breaking eggs.’ And if one replies, ‘Yes, but where is the omelette?’, the answer is likely to be: ‘Oh well, you can’t expect everything to happen all in a moment.’


This passage, written amid Orwell's disillusionment with Stalin's purges (which killed tens of millions via famine, gulags, and executions), forms the anecdote's foundation. It is therefore not inconceivable that a "Marxist defender" might be lacerated in such a way by Orwell, who "points out all the failures" in his lucid, clear-eyed rebuttal.


As we dig deeper still we can see how this story gained traction as a meme-like quip in the late 20th century, especially post-Cold War, to mock failed communist regimes. It appears in:

  • George Will's 2016 Washington Post column on Fidel Castro, framing it as Orwell's "acid" reply to 1930s Stalin apologists.
  • Similar op-eds in The Australian Financial Review (2016) and Socialist Viewpoint (2007), tying it to utopian failures.
  • Online discussions, e.g., TV Tropes (2009) calling it "popular but likely apocryphal," and X posts recirculating it as a direct quote (e.g., from 2023 and 2025).

Bottom Line: It seems to be a faithful encapsulation of Orwell's anti-totalitarian wit but not a literal event—more a cultural shorthand for questioning revolutionary violence without results.


Related Orwell Links

George Orwell's "How the Poor Die": Exploring Themes of Inequality, Neglect and Other Grim Realities

https://pioneerproductions.blogspot.com/2024/09/george-orwells-how-poor-die-exploring.html

George Orwell on Wells, Hitler and "Patriotism vs. the World State"

https://pioneerproductions.blogspot.com/2021/07/george-orwell-on-wells-hitler-and.html

George Orwell’s Homage to Catalonia

https://pioneerproductions.blogspot.com/2021/08/orwells-homage-to-catalonia-is.html

Orwell on Media Mischief

https://pioneerproductions.blogspot.com/2021/11/orwell-on-media-mischief.html

Orwell's Homage to Catalonia Is Instructive on Many Levels, Plus a Good Read

https://pioneerproductions.blogspot.com/2021/08/orwells-homage-to-catalonia-is.html

Flashback Friday: Did you Know George Orwell Took a Stand Against Paperbacks?

https://pioneerproductions.blogspot.com/2019/11/flashback-friday-did-you-know-george.html

Public Introspection: George Orwell's Why I Write

https://pioneerproductions.blogspot.com/2016/08/public-introspection-george-orwells-why.html

Shooting an Elephant

https://pioneerproductions.blogspot.com/2011/05/shooting-elephant.html
Excerpts from Orwell's The Road to Wigan Pier

https://pioneerproductions.blogspot.com/2023/09/excerpts-from-orwells-road-to-wigan-pier.html


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