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Wednesday, April 29, 2026

Lucy's Encounter with "The Magician's Book" in Voyage of the Dawn Treader

The Voyage of the Dawn Treader is probably my favorite of the seven volumes of C.S. Lewis' The Chronicles of Narnia. One reason this volume is so popular is because of Reepicheep, the courageous, swashbuckling leader of The Talking Mice of Narnia. This blog post, however, is about an incident involving Lucy on the Island of the Dufflepuds.

The Voyage of the Dawn Treader (1952) is the fifth book in the series (by publication order). The chapter involving Lucy and the magical book is one of my favorite episodes, both pivotal and richly symbolic. It occurs in Chapter 10, which is aptly titled “The Magician’s Book,” when Lucy, Edmund, and Caspian, aboard the ship Dawn Treader, visit the Island of the Dufflepuds (also called the Monopods or Duffers) and encounter the magician Coriakin’s house. 


All readers of this series understand that nearly everything in these stories is o be taken allegorically. In this chapter Lucy, Edmund, and Caspian, along with their crew, land on this island inhabited by the comically inept Dufflepuds, invisible creatures who were made so by their master, the magician Coriakin, as a punishment for their disobedience. (For the record, Lucy and Edmund are children from our world and Caspian is a prince from the world of Narnia.)


The Dufflepuds, believing Lucy is brave enough to face the magician, demand she enter his house to reverse the spell of invisibility by reading from the magician's magical book. Lucy, somewhat apprehensive, agrees to undertake the task alone, as the others are wary of the magician’s power.


When Lucy enters Coriakin’s grand, mysterious house, she ascends to a room filled with books, artifacts, and an atmosphere of enchantment. In the center of the room is a large, ancient book—the Magician’s Book—bound in leather, and filled with spells written in beautiful, clear script. The pages are alive with magic, and Lucy must find the spell to make the Dufflepuds visible again. 


As she turns the pages, she encounters a variety of spells, including one to “know what other people think of you,” one to make someone beautiful “beyond the lot of mortals,” and another to cure warts. The book’s pages seem to turn on their own at times, adding to its mystical aura.


As she leafs through the pages Lucy is tempted by the spell to hear what others think of her. She casts it and overhears a conversation between her schoolmate Marjorie Preston and another girl, revealing Marjorie’s insincere flattery and mild betrayal. This devastates Lucy, sowing seeds of insecurity and resentment, though she later reflects on the harm of such knowledge.


When she comes to the "Spell of Beauty" Lucy nearly casts a spell to make herself irresistibly beautiful, motivated by envy of her sister Susan’s beauty. She sees a vision of herself transformed, outshining Susan and causing strife, but Aslan’s face appears in the book, growling softly, stopping her. This moment underscores her struggle with vanity and pride. (For the record, Aslan is a lion, fearful and wonderful, powerful and wise, who is central throughout the Chronicles.)


Lucy finally finds the spell to make “things visible which are not to be seen.” She reads it aloud, and the Dufflepuds’ invisibility is undone, revealing their comical, one-footed forms. As she reads, Aslan appears beside her, unnoticed at first, guiding her through the process.


After casting the spell, Lucy meets Aslan, who gently rebukes her for eavesdropping via the spell, explaining that the conversation she overheard was distorted and incomplete, teaching her the dangers of seeking forbidden knowledge--and teaching young readers the danger of listening in to others' conversations.) He also reveals that he was with her all along, guiding her through the book’s temptations. 


Coriakin, the magician, then appears, a kind, wise figure—a retired star sent to govern the island as a form of divine service. He hosts the group for a meal, explaining the Dufflepuds’ quirks and his role in their reformation.


The spell successfully makes the Dufflepuds visible, and they rejoice, though their bumbling nature persists. Lucy’s experience with the book leaves her wiser, having confronted her own flaws—curiosity, envy, and pride—while learning to trust Aslan’s guidance. The chapter ends with the crew preparing to leave the island, enriched by the encounter.


The lessons in this chapter alone are many, dealing with temptation and moral growth, the power of knowledge, warnings about curiosity driven by pride, and Aslan (as a Christ figure) as a divine presence. Regarding the Magician's Book, this has layers of meaning, too. We live in a world that is beyond our comprehension. C.S. Lewis addresses this in his space trilogy as well, most vividly in That Hideous Strength. The very existence of Narnia implies worlds beyond our comprehension. 


Coriakin, a star tasked by Aslan to govern the island, represents a steward of divine power, contrasting with the corrupting magic of figures like the White Witch in earlier books. The book’s spells are neutral tools, their morality depending on the user’s intent.


Some people has suggested The Magician’s Book could be seen as a metaphor for the Bible or spiritual knowledge, containing truths and powers that require discernment to wield rightly. Lucy’s journey through its pages mirrors a spiritual pilgrimage, testing her virtues and exposing her weaknesses.


Overall this chapter serves as a standalone adventure within the broader voyage of the Dawn Treader’s quest toward Aslan’s country. It entertains by balancing humor (the Dufflepuds are hilarious) with profound moral questions, making it accessible to younger readers while offering depth for adults. Lucy’s experience prepares her for later challenges, reinforcing her faith and resilience.


It's interesting that C.S. Lewis took a lot of heat from his peers for publishing The Chronicles of Narnia. He was a professor at Oxford and gaining fame by writing children's books was frowned upon. It was out of character for a dignified Oxford professor. The novel’s message, that true wisdom lies in aligning one’s will with the divine, was in alignment with Lewis's own quest. And the world has been made richer for it.

Wednesday, January 5, 2022

Turning the Page on 2021--Topics I Started to Write about but Didn't Follow Through On or Publish

Yes, I'm gonna be a star! How 'bout you?
Photo courtesy Gary Firstenberg
I don't always post something every day, though most days I've made an attempt. Usually there are two or three ideas waiting in the wings. Sometimes I develop them a little, other times I just make an outline with a URL directed to the trigger story that sparked the idea.  

Sometimes I go back and finish an idea that I'd previously set aside. Other times, the seed thoughts whither and die on the vine. What follows is a list of these incomplete or undeveloped ideas. I find it interesting that in January I'd planned to write about Peter Jackson's upcoming Get Back project involving The Beatles, and that by year's end everyone was talking about it. 

If this list bores you, feel free to turn the page. I won't be offended.

TOPICS I STARTED BUT DID NOT COMPLETE OR PUBLISH 


JANUARY

The Incredible Variety and Depth of the Dylan Catalog

Watching the Wheels Go Round: John Lennon Sidesteps the Rat Race

The Beatles: Peter Jackson and Get Back.  (Jan 6)

Bohemian Rhapsody

Too Much Regulation

A Brief History of My Car Accidents

Fallout

On January 20: Stay Home

Peter Schweizer Reveals the Depressing Degree of Corruption in Washington

Budget Deficits: When Should We Begin to Be Concerned

The Biggest Problem with Cancel Culture: There’s No Mercy

More Russell (as in Bertrand)

Politics and Dogma

The Duke Lacrosse Case

200 Motels: Zappa Revisited

You’re Aging Well

Still in Awe of Dylan


FEBRUARY

Fresh Ideas in Taxation: Universal Minimum Wage and Flat Tax Thoughts

Fun with Numbers: The Numeral 3

Orwell's Road to Wigan Pier

Facts vs. Interpretations

Financial Thoughts

Housing the Poor

More Thoughts On Cancel Culture

Our Schools Are a Mess, So We Tell Americans How Bad China Is

Notes from C.S. Lewis, A Life: Eccentric Genius, Reluctant Prophet

The Important Role of a Father

Tolstoy's The Forged Coupon

Weather Modification: Is Someone Playing with the Weather?

Daniel Botkin’s Psurrealistic Psalms

EVs and the Future of Transportation

Another Cut from Empire Burlesque—I’ll Remember You

Only Lovers Left Alive Is No Ordinary Vampire Flick

Eugenics and Socialism

Vasily Kandinsky

It’s Getting Scarier and Scarier

The Value of Rituals and Routines

Intelligence Doesn't Necessarily Make One Compassionate or Wise: The Eugenics Movement

Executive Orders: The Good, the Bad and the Ugly

The Brouhaha Over When Harry Became Sally

The Three Worst Supreme Court Decisions In U.S. History

The Future of Public Education


MARCH

Are You Feeling Lucky?

Tech Tuesday: The Genomic Revolution

The Marvin Hagler Many Never Knew

Michael Lewis' The Fifth Risk Sheds Light on Part of What Went Wrong These Past Four Years in Washington

Cry Me A River

I Am Not Your Negro--The James Baldwin Documentary

Reedley Relocation Camps of World War II

Sam Cooke & Dylan

A Few Personal Thoughts on the American Revolution, Viet Nam and History: Comparisons, Contrasts

Some Thoughts Regarding Appropriate Timing 


APRIL

Financial Euphoria and the Madness of Crowds

There Are No Guarantees

Recalls Continue to Be a Bane to the Auto Industry

An Example of Spin or Just an Oops?

How to Make a Living as a Writer

A to Z Challenge: Blonde On Blonde

A to Z Challenge: Abortion

A to Z Challenge: Boko Haram

Low Income Housing: Is It Time to Stop Jawboning?

The Fall of Rome 

Billy Collins, Roze & Blud

Interesting Lines from Recent Movies

My Own Version of You: Dylan's Frankenstein Story

Ah Look at All the Lonely People

Mixed Messages

Starting with This: A Quote from The Rules of the Game


MAY

Specificity and Ambiguity: A Trademark Dylan Technique

A Deeper Dive: I Pity the Poor Immigrant

Frost Museum To Show Most Comprehensive Display of Dylan's Art 

Ernest J. Breton and the Secret to Creative Innovation and Invention

Standing Up for Nuclear

My Take on Yesterday (The Movie)

12 Monkeys: Hollywood Entertainment or Prescience?

A Half Hour Happy Hour with the Folks from Heaven’s Door

Interesting and Unusual People I’ve Known Across the Years

The 1619 Project Creates New Narrative that Is Crafted and Crafty


JUNE

The War Poems of C.S.Lewis and Bob Dylan’s Staunch Anti-War Stand

The Jobs Situation: Another Illustration of the Law of Unintended Consequences

WSJ Review of “Damage” Is Right On Target, So Direct

Favorite Borges Short Stories

The Influence of Johnny Cash, the Connector

Ripples in a Pond: Finding Our Own Identity and Making Our Own Mark

Cronkite 

Community Reacts Negatively to More Jobs Coming

A Little Bit Scary? Report Your Friends and Family Members Who Might…

A Few Insights About Quarreling

The Interconnectedness of the Global Economy

Reputation Can Be an Asset or Liability: The E.F. Hutton Scandal

Tales of Brave Ulysses

It’s My Life, Do I Know What I Want?

“My Country Right Or Wrong” Is Wrong

Bob Dylan’s “The Wicked Messenger”

Favorite Films of All Time


JULY

Things We Don’t Like to Talk About: Suicides and Nervous Breakdowns

Massive College Debt: When Illusion Meets Reality

Wally Funk and the Blue Origin

Why Are We Still Wearing Masks?   

Ohio University Commencement Exercise Music, 1974

Orwell’s Homage to Catalonia: A Review

Injustice and Violence: First Hand and Second Hand

Orwell, Churchill and Totalitarianism

What Will the Year 2040 Look Like in America?

The Future: Frightful or Delightful? The Power of the State Continues to Expand

Churchill and Orwell: Insights and Takeaways


AUGUST

10 Great Dylan Songs? By What Criteria?

Why Punctuality Matters

The Board Game Market

Everything Is Broken

It’s a White, White, White, White World

The Future of Education

A Strategy for Standing Out from the Herd

Kentaro Kobayasha, The Rolling Stones and the PC Police

Penny Lane, the Oxbow Incident and the Problem of Mobs

The EV Dilemma

Springtime in New York: Just In Time for Fall


SEPTEMBER

A Pair of Orson Welles Anecdotes

Is the Cancel Culture Craze America’s Latest Fad? How Long Will It Continue

A Glimpse of Bob Dylan’s Malibu by Martin Newman

Harvard Prof Richard Thomas Says, “Start Your Dylan Tour In Duluth”

Are Homeless Camps the New Normal?

Rex Lex: What It Means and Why It Is Important

The EV Reality Check

Re-Thinking Universal Basic Income

Colonel Parker

A Shoplifting Epidemic


OCTOBER

Who Knows Where the Time Goes

An Hour of Poetry for People Who Say Are Not Into Poetry

Virtue Signaling

Clickbait Headlines

Planning to Go Carbon Free? Say Goodbye to Bubble Gum

My Favorite Things: Movies (Updated)


NOVEMBER

The Roberto Clemente Museum in Pittsburgh: Worthy Tribute to a Great Ballplayer and a Great Human Being

The Rough and Rowdy Road Tour Is Underway: Dylan Still Has That Old Black Magic

Bad Grammar (Examples)

Greenwashing: What It Is and How It Happens
Minyades: Richard Höglund’s Breakthrough Paintings Excavate the Darkness

Tech Tuesday: A.I. Is Already Taking White Collar Writing Jobs. Who's Next?

AI Writes a Review of a Book About AI

Jack Dorsey Steps Down from Twitter Leadership

The Sheer Madness of the Battle of the Somme


DECEMBER

The Great Escape: Estonia 1944

Of Boosters, Vaxx Mandates and Government Hypocrisy

Bob Dylan 'Retrospectrum' artwork show opens Nov. 30 in Miami

Niall Ferguson on the Gods of History

L A Confidential Brings to Mind Stories from Nevada Bob's Memoir

Immersive Art Outside of Museums -- Why Are the Critics Cringing?

Redistricting: The Times’ Spin Seems Misleading To Me

Northland Influences on Bob Dylan


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Looking at the photo of the starfish at the top of the page has me wondering why, why, why are there so many stars in the sky? And what is the point of all this beauty under the sea? What an amazing universe. 

Friday, February 26, 2021

The Wit and Wisdom of G.K. Chesterton

Nearly everyone who has achieved anything of significance will be quick to acknowledge their gratitude to those influential thinkers, writers, artists, people who came before them. One writer who made an impact on C.S. Lewis was G.K. Chesterton, a prolific British writer whose diverse output covered a multitude of genres from philosophy, ontology, poetry, play writing and journalism to public lecturing, debating, art criticism, biography, Christian apologetics and fiction, including both fantasy and detective stories (cf. The Father Brown Mysteries).

I'm currently reading his pointed book Eugenics and Other Evils and have picked up a volume or two of his Father Brown Mysteries featuring a Roman Catholic priest who is an amateur sleuth on the order of Jessica Lansbury in Murder She Wrote. The latter stories are good fun; his book on eugenics is a serious issues oriented volume intended to bring a moral conscience to a then-pervasive bad idea that had swept the Western world. By this I mean the "ideal" of improving the future of the human race by eliminating bad genes from the gene pool via sterilization. 

Believe it or not, 33 states passed legislation approving this practice which had been promulgated by the liberal elite, including men like J.B.S. Haldane, H.G. Wells and Bertrand Russell. It was while researching and writing about eugenics that I came to understand why the London Times was praising Hitler on its editorial pages as late as 1936. It was because he had the courage to follow through on this Darwinian clean-up job to make a more perfect humanity. 

Chesterton's writings in opposition to eugenics inspired Lewis to later put pen to paper and take a critical stance in opposition to cruelty to animals in general and vivisection specifically. 

Alas, I've gone far afield of my intent here. I simply wished to write a preface to some thought provoking quotes by G.K. Chesterton. Note how many are totally relevant a hundred years later.

* * * 

Journalism possesses in itself the potentiality of becoming one of the most frightful monstrosities and delusions that have ever cursed mankind. This horrible transformation will occur at the exact instant at which journalists realize that they can become an aristocracy.
--The New Priests

* * * 

Reason is always a kind of brute force; those who appeal to the head rather than the heart, however pallid and polite, are necessarily men of violence. We speak of "touching" a man's heart, but we can do nothing to his head but hit it.
--Twelve Types

* * * 

Briefly, you can only find  truth with logic if you have already found truth without it.
--Daily News

* * *

The riddles of God are more satisfying than the solutions of man.
--Introduction to the Book of Job

* * *

Men do not differ much about what things they will call evils; they differ enormously about what evils they will call excusable.
-- Illustrated London News

    * * *

    To have a right to do a thing is not at all the same as to be right in doing it.
    --A Short History of England

    * * *

    It is terrible to contemplate how few politicians are hanged
    --Cleveland Press

    * * *

    Fallacies do not cease to be fallacies because they become fashions.
    --Illustrated London News

    * * * 

    I've searched all the parks in all the cities — and found no statues of Committees.
    --As quoted in Trust or Consequences

      * * *

      The poor object to being governed badly, while the rich object to being governed at all.
      --As quoted in Grace at the Table

      * * *

      There is no such thing on earth as an uninteresting subject; the only thing that can exist is an uninterested person.
      --Heretics

        * * *

        There is a great man who makes every man feel small. But the real great man is the man who makes every man feel great.
        --The Dickens Period

        * * * 

        Poets have been mysteriously silent on the subject of cheese.
        --Alarms and Discursion

        * * * 

        Dogma does not mean the absence of thought, but the end of thought.
          --The Victorian Compromise and Its Enemies

          * * * 

          The rich are the scum of the earth in every country.
          --The Flying Inn

          * * *

          The most incredible thing about miracles is that they happen.
          --The Father Brown Mysteries

          * * *

          Hopefully you found something here worth pondering. Chesterton has served us plenty to chew on and digest. 

            Sunday, May 10, 2020

            Washington Is Broken. Here's How To Fix It.

            COVID-19 didn't cause the problem. It only made apparent how serious the problem is. The two-party system is broken. Neither party is interested in working together to solve problems. Based on observing their behavior for half a lifetime, it's apparent that each party's sole aim is to maintain power, to control the playing cards.

            Compromise has become such an odious notion that no one wants to compromise anything. This is why we will have to eliminate it from the national vocabulary.

            When politicians compromise, their constituents get angry at them. As a result, they fear repercussions, and it clouds their thinking. (Whenever you see behavior that seems irrational and doesn't make sense, if you probe you'll generally find a fear-based cause underneath it.)

            SO we get rid of the word altogether. "No Compromise" now means, "No, I will not use the word Compromise."

            Instead we will use the words Cooperate and Collaborate.

            WHAT IF
            What if we were to cast a spell over the Capitol that forced every congressperson to be locked in a room until they actually agreed on something. I know, it sounds like a fantasy, but what if?

            What if instead of attacking each other from across the aisle, they got on the same side of the aisle and looked at the problems in front of them from the same angle. Us against the problem, not us against you.

            * * * *
            The mess is a mess. One thing I learned a long time ago is that if you want to find out HOW things failed, you'll never find out the truth if your detectives show up with a hanging judge in tow. 

            Why do we listen to all this blame game, since we (again) do not really have all the facts, but only know that which has been mediated to us through others. This is why C.S. Lewis never read the newspapers. What's really happening is seldom covered, and if it was important you might hear about it six months from now.

            Realistically, I do not expect things to be fixed. The best we can hope for might be damage control.

            As Milton Friedman wrote in An Economists Protest, "I think the government solution to a problem is usually as bad as the problem and very often makes the problem worse." 

            * * * *

            Forgive me but, to paraphrase  the Everly Brothers, "All I want to do is dream, dream, dream."

            Sunday, June 23, 2019

            My Most Read Stories On Medium This Week and a C.S. Lewis Quote

            Friday was the longest day of the year. It was also the kickoff for Grandma's Marathon weekend with their pre-marathon 5K event that I ran two years ago. The weather has been perfect for running and/or walking... or watching. Saturday's marathon was once again run with enthusiasm. 9000 runners this year.

            The week my most-read stories on Medium were:

            12 Powerful Novellas That Moved Me When I First Read Them 

            A Pocketful of Points to Ponder by Socrates
            Published in A Philosopher's Stone

            The Chemistry of Photography: A Father’s Day Tribute
            My Father's Day tribute

            A Funny Thing Happened on the Way to the Infobahn
            Published in The Startup

            Creating Crossword Puzzles for Fun & Profit: A Visit with Christina Iverson
            Also published in The Startup

            The Virtue of Discipline
            On becoming our better selves.

            Memories: Both a Comfort and a Curse

            Awed by Two Van Gogh Paintings at the National Gallery

            * * * *
            THOT FOR THE DAY
            "Mankind is so fallen that no man can be trusted with unchecked power over his fellows. Aristotle said that some people were only fit to be slaves. I do not contradict him. But I reject slavery because I see no men fit to be masters."--C.S. Lewis

            Tuesday, April 23, 2019

            The Influence of G.K. Chesterton: Perfect Pith

            G.K. Chesterton
            Influences: We all have roots, and if one were to make the effort we could probably each make a genealogical tree of our ideas, identifying the people who have been our own chief influences.

            The same holds true for the authors and thinkers whose books we have become familiar with. We certainly see it in politicians who frequently cite their influences by quoting the men and women who have inspired them.

            C.S. Lewis, whose writings have been tremendously influential in the past century, had a circle of friends that included J.R.R. Tolkien. These friends were undoubtedly important people in his personal development. As for roots, Lewis made note of two major literary figures from a preceding generation: George MacDonald and G.K. Chesterton. MacDonald was a Scottish author, poet and minister who also happened to be a friend and mentor of Lewis Carroll. (Now you know the roots of The Chronicles of Narnia.)

            As for Chesterton, he was a writer, philosopher, journalist, dramatist, orator, lay theologian and creative spirit. A contemporary of Sir Arthur Conan Doyle, his Father Brown (Father Brown Mysteries) was equal to Sherlock Holmes and Agatha Christie's shrewd observers of the devious, Hercule Poirot and Miss Marple. (Who doesn't love a good mystery now and then?)

            As a setup for an upcoming blog post I thought it appropriate to introduce Gilbert Keith Chesterton, the keen social critic and wit whose book The Everlasting Man made an impact on the young hot-headed atheist, C.S. Lewis.

            * * * *
            Here are some Chesterton quotes to help acquaint you with his mind and wit. Read them slowly, rather than as quickly as you can. 

            "Impartiality is a pompous name for indifference, which is an elegant name for ignorance."

            "The riddles of God are more satisfying than the solutions of man."

            "The world will never starve for want of wonders; but only for want of wonder."

            "Poets have been mysteriously silent on the subject of cheese."

            "To have a right to do a thing is not at all the same as to be right in doing it."

            "Fallacies do not cease to be fallacies because they become fashions."

            "What embitters the world is not excess of criticism, but absence of self-criticism."

            "I've searched all the parks in all the cities — and found no statues of Committees."

            "There is a great man who makes every man feel small. But the real great man is the man who makes every man feel great."

            "The most incredible thing about miracles is that they happen."

            "One can sometimes do good by being the right person in the wrong place."

            From his essay on Tolstoy:
            "The truth is that Tolstoy, with his immense genius, with his colossal faith, with his vast fearlessness and vast knowledge of life, is deficient in one faculty and one faculty alone. He is not a mystic; and therefore he has a tendency to go mad. Men talk of the extravagances and frenzies that have been produced by mysticism; they are a mere drop in the bucket. In the main, and from the beginning of time, mysticism has kept men sane. The thing that has driven them mad was logic. ...The only thing that has kept the race of men from the mad extremes of the convent and the pirate-galley, the night-club and the lethal chamber, has been mysticism — the belief that logic is misleading, and that things are not what they seem."

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            Sunday, February 4, 2018

            Writer's Workshop: 20 Grand Openings

            I've been listening to the Great Courses lecture series titled Great Authors of the Western Literary Tradition, an 42-CD set with 84 half-hour lectures offering bite-sized overviews of many of the influential figures in literary history. Last night I finished the Tolstoy lecture on Anna Karenina, which opens with this classic first sentence: "All happy families are alike; each unhappy family is unhappy in its own way."

            Just last week I was thinking about the multitude of ways performers and song writers begin songs. The opening triggers a feel for what's to come, and carries you, or slams you, into the song itself. The crowd noise at the beginning of The Beatles' Sgt. Pepper conveys a sense of performance in which a curtain lifts and the opening chords tell us to get ready for the show.

            Magical Mystery Tour begins with a trumpet fanfare of sorts and the voice of a conductor announcing it's time to roll up for the Mystery Tour, "step right this way." The last song on the album -- originally released as a single -- also begins with a trumpet fanfare, only this time its the French National Anthem, "La Marseillaise."

            Think about all the ways that your favorite songs begin. Sometimes it's a bass line as in "Lady Madonna" and sometimes its a distinctive drum intro as in "Honky Tonk Women," or a male chorus as in "You Can't Always Get What You Want." When you hear the opening you know immediately, if you're familiar with the piece, where it is going to take you. Other songs with distinctive openings that came to mind for me included "Magic Bus" by The Who, "Layla" by Eric Clapton, "Pretty Woman" by Roy Orbison, and that twangy guitar that opens "Folsom Prison Blues" by Johnny Cash. An hundred more songs could be listed here and you probably have faves of your own you could share.
            * * * * 
            Twenty-five years ago, after being an extra in the film Iron Will (shot here in Duluth) I imagined becoming a Hollywood screenwriter and wrote or co-wrote a few screenplays and treatments. In learning how to write for the silver screen I watched the first ten minutes of what seemed like a hundred movies (from the library). It was a learning experience. My favorite was probably Alfred Hitchcock's Lifeboat. See how he tells the story, introducing one person at a time and developing the ten characters through mini-vignettes. Notice how the storyline is created when the tenth man climbs into the boat.

            But alas, we're talking first lines of novels here. And we'd best get to it. Here are some first lines from my readings. Tale of Two Cities I read in ninth grade, so these are from a half century of reading.

            1.
            As I reflected on this theme the first one that came to mind was the opening line of Moby Dick
            "Call me Ishmael." That's a three-word sentence that conveys much when you assemble all of it's associations. So direct.

            2.
            The next that came to mind for me was this classic opening line from Dickens' Tale of Two Cities: It was the best of times, it was the worst of times, it was the age of wisdom, it was the age of foolishness, it was the epoch of belief, it was the epoch of incredulity, it was the season of Light, it was the season of Darkness, it was the spring of hope, it was the winter of despair, we had everything before us, we had nothing before us, we were all going direct to Heaven, we were all going direct the other way – in short, the period was so far like the present period, that some of its noisiest authorities insisted on its being received, for good or for evil, in the superlative degree of comparison only.

            3.
            It was a bright cold day in April, and the clocks were striking 13.  (1984, George Orwell)

            4.
            You don't know about me without you have read a book by the name of The Adventures of Tom Sawyer; but that ain't no matter. (The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn, Mark Twain)

            5.
            Someone must have slandered Josef K., for one morning, without having done anything truly wrong, he was arrested. (The Trial, Franz Kafka)

            6.
            If you really want to hear about it, the first thing you'll probably want to know is where I was born, and what my lousy childhood was like, and how my parents were occupied and all before they had me, and all that David Copperfield kind of crap, but I don't feel like going into it, if you want to know the truth. (Catcher in the Rye, J.D. Salinger)

            7.
            Mother died today. (The Stranger, Albert Camus)

            8.
            The sky above the port was the color of television, tuned to a dead channel. (Neuromancer, William Gibson)

            9.
            All this happened, more or less. (Slaughterhouse-Five, Kurt Vonnegut)

            10.
            I had the story, bit by bit, from various people, and, as generally happens in such cases, each time it was a different story. (Ethan Frome, Edith Wharton)

            * * * *

            O.K. so that's ten. Plus there were ten songs, for my self-imposed target of 20.  One could easily make a list of first lines of songs that serve as setups, but this is as far as we'll go here. Writers -- whether playwrights, songwriters, poets or novelists -- have a lot of weight on their shoulders when trying to write a first sentence or first paragraph. Bloggers, too, think about this.

            Some other time we'll look at endings. This time, though, I'll end with another grand opening, from one of my favorite stories, The Voyage of the Dawn Treader, by C.S. Lewis: There was a boy called Eustace Clarence Scrubb, and he almost deserved it.

            What's your favorite opening line?

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